Flash Critique 3rd March '08

I've attended my critique session with a selection of my peers today, I feel it went well, I received some good feedback that I will apply to my video, some of the comments made were the following:

• Maybe add road signs - The enforces the denotations of vehicles etc.
• Road marking style type for type placed on the roads.
• Scene 3 type each set of text should be masked by a car.
• Add sound for an extra dimensions.

I feel I've got enough time to do these, I will submit working examples as and when I do them onto here.

On a totally different subject, after flicking through the latest Creative Review, I found some links to photography agencies in London and Bournemouth. I hope to do some more extensive research on these.